REMINDERS: These critiques are for those who prefer a private critique versus a public one. Please read my prior post on Query Tips before entering. Also, as mentioned in my big giveaway, I tend to be very direct and picky, but my goal is to get your query in the best shape possible. Finally, the query is only the first step--make sure the entire book is as good as the query before you hit "Send" to an agent or editor. To enter the weekly query critique giveaway, simply follow the directions below. Good luck!
RULES:
Just
leave a comment telling me you'd like to be entered in the giveaway and
give your email address, using (at) and (com) as follows so the spam
bots don't find you.
I
will use a random number generator to pick the winner who will receive a
query critique through email.
NOTE: If your query involves space monkeys, I might make an exception and do an extra critique!
NOTE: If your query involves space monkeys, I might make an exception and do an extra critique!
Hi again. Strangely, I'm taking a query hiatus while I work on some revisions, so I don't actually need an urgent query critique at the moment. In the spirit of doing my revisions, though, I'm also rewriting the query, though, so if I win, then, whoo hoo! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks again!
LauraHughesAuthor (at) gmail (dot) com
I'll throw my hat in the ring and see how much luck I may have when you spin the random number generator :) Thanks for offering the critiques.
ReplyDeleteaprilmwall(at)yahoo(dot)com
Thanks for this wonderful opportunity, wish I would get lucky today
ReplyDeletesearthy {at} gmail {dot} com
Good luck to everyone who enters. Kristi gave me some great tips when I was a winner. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sharon--I'm so glad it was helpful!
DeleteI tweeted your post and someone already retweeted it. :)
DeleteThat's awesome--thanks!
DeleteME! Pick me!
ReplyDeleteAwesome! I've been working on different versions of my query all week, so this would be good timing.
ReplyDeletesteph_smith_performer (at) yahoo (dot) com
Yes. My query has been overworked and lost its voice. I need a crit on the new one. Hopefully I get lucky.
ReplyDeleteRaeFo123 {at} gmail {dot} com